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Unit 1~24 피드백 후 수정완료

Unit 1. When was the last time you had a dental appointment? How did it go? Give lots of details to describe your experience there. 

The last time I went to a dental clinic was one year ago.
Unfortunately, I had to receive a dental treatment.
I was very nervous. The dentist said, "It will not hurt." I felt pain, but I could bear it.
To be honest, if I had been 7 years old at that time, I would have cried.

I will go to the dental clinic soon to get scaling.

However, I' m hesitant to make a dental appointment yet.

 

 

 

Unit 2. Where do you usually eat lunch? Whom do you eat with? What do you usually eat? 

I have lunch at a cafeteria with co-workers.
I usually eat Korean food, such as rice, Korean soup, and a side dish.
We can get food freely.
Sometimes, we eat a special meal.
I look forward to eating special food.
If I have special food, I will eat two bowls.
I love to eat Korean food so much.
There are many kinds of spicy food in Korean food.
Unfortunatly, I can't have spicy food at all.
I wonder how do Koreans eat such spicy food well.

 

 

 

Unit3. Write about your ideal party. Where would it be? Who would come? What would you do there?

I think that my ideal party is a pajama party. 

Many people love a fancy party. 

Because there is something to eat, and something to enjoy. 

But i prefer to have a cozy, comfortable pajama party with my close friends. 

We bring our pajamas, presents, food, and we get together in a friend's house. 

We take a photo and give each other presents.

It's not a big deal to have a party in former times.

Now it's too difficult to meet each other owing to one's schedule. 

That's why my ideal party is a pajama party. 

 

 

 

 

Unit 4. Your friend is moving to a new town. Give her some advice about how to make some new friends there. 

I heard that you are moving to a new town.
I'll give you some advice about how to make some friends there.


First, you have to visit your neighborhood with a small gift and introduce yourself to them.
Then, they also introduce themselves and tell about a town.
If you have any questions about a new town, you can feel free to ask them.

Second, you should go to the public establishment such as park, library.
There are some people who take a walk with a dog, and read a book.
If library runs a book club, you can participate in a book club.

Finally, you need to do volunteer work.
Volunteers do many activities in a town.
For example, you can donate your talent for children.

You do not only know the town, but also make new friends more easily.
I wish my advice can help you to make some friends.

 

 

 

 

Unit 5. Have you met your neighbors? If so, what are they like? If not, what do you imagine about them? 

Yes. I have met my neighbors.
They had lived in the city for a long time, then they moved into the town for three years.
My neighbors are always kind and hospitable.
When we meet by chance, we say hello to the other family.
My neighbors recently distributed pizza for the neighborhood.
If they go on a trip, they buy a small gift for us.
As far as I know, their son graduated from Seoul National University that is the most difficult to enter in Korea.
My neighbor sometimes play the saxophone.
At first, I didn't like to hear that.
But my neighbor becomes more and more competent.
Now I enjoy the music.
I want to get along with my neighbors like now.

 

 

 

 

Unit 6. Where does your closest friend live? Write directions to get from your house to your friend’s house. 

My closest friend lives in Anyang, Korea.
Her house is too far from me.
It takes about four hours and a half hours.
I went there to meet my closest friend four days ago.


To get there, I take a bus from Wonji to Seoul South Terminal.
It takes three hours and a half hours.
When I arrive at Seoul, I take a subway line 3 at Seoul South Terminal Station.
Then, I transfer to line 2 at Seoul College of Education Station.
And I transfer to line 4 at Sadang Station.
When I arrive in Bumgye Staion, I get off the subway.
I walk to Hansol Central Park for five minutes.


I can't meet her often, because of the long distance.
I'd like to get along with her more often.

 

 

 

 

Unit 7. How often do you see your family/friends? Do you think this is enough? Why or why not? 

I live with my family, except for my sisters now.
My older sister lives in Kimhae, Korea, alone.
I see her once in two weeks.
My younger sister lives in a dormitory of her college.
I see her once a week.
My younger brother lives and spends a lot of time.
I think that it is enough because we always communicate with them through Kakao Talk.
Moreover, my younger sister and I sometimes go to our older sister’s house.
We often go shopping together and go to a basketball stadium to cheer for our team.
My sisters and brother are my close friends.
That’s why I think that it is enough.
The traditional Korean holiday ‘Seol’ is upcoming.
We will get together and spend a good time in ‘Seol’!.

 

 

 

 

Unit 8. What does your best friend look like? Give lots of details to help the reader imagine him/her. 

My best friend is Eunjeong Park.
She is 26 and a hair designer.
She has short and bleached hair.
So we look at her hair at first sight.
She likes bright color clothes, such as yellow, pink, and she loves casual clothes.
She is wearing glasses because of her bad sight.
She has dark eyebrows. I don't have dark eyebrows, so I envy her.
I would say about her more; she has big eyes, nose, mouth, and voice.
When we were middle school students, teacher scolded her because of her big voice.
Teacher thought that my best friend is always noisy.
My best friend is good at every sport such as running, jump rope, and soccer.
She is sometimes lazy.
She doesn't like to confirm her message.
There are about 300 unconfirmed messages in her phone.
If someone wants to contact her, someone has to call her not message.

 

 

 

 

Unit 9. I want to buy a watch for my father. Please give me a piece of advice about what kind of watch to buy. Give lots of details that will help me decide. 

I have heard that you are looking for a watch to give your father.
So I will give you some advice.
I have heard from someone that a watch is a measure of success for men.
It means that a watch is very important for men.
You had better buy a watch as expensive as possible within your financial condition.
There are two options: a metal watch or a leather watch.
If your father usually wears suits, I recommend a metal watch for him.
If not, I recommend a leather watch for him.
And you choose the style of watch: simple style or fancy style.
Options are a measure of preference, but a metal watch has a risk of scratches.
I hope my advice will help you to choose a good watch for your father.
Your father will be very happy to receive any watch.

 

 

 

Unit 10. America has daylight saving time (DST), but some countries do not. Do you think daylight saving time (DST) is necessary? Why or why not? 

In my opinion, daylight saving time is necessary.


First, daylight saving time is a method with nature.
Human needs to spend time in the sunlight because sunlight contains vitaminD.
As far as I know, if we don't have vitaminD enough, we undergo depression.
Also, we have concerns with bones.
By executing daylight saving time, we have a good influence.


Second, we save energy through daylight saving time.
Daylight saving time usually is operated in summer.
We should get up earlier, and go to the bed earlier in summer.
We use a lot of energy so far, so we have to economize energy for the earth.


In fact, there are many obstacles to execute daylight saving time in Korea.
It involves administration fee and it causes confusion.
Although we become more uncomfortable than before, daylight saving time is absolutely necessary.

 

 

 

Unit 11. How often does it rain in your country? Do you think it rains too much? Not enough? Just enough? Why? 

I think that it is just enough in Korea.
As far as I know, Korea's rainfall is higher than the world's average.
The amount of rainfall differs season by season.
It sometimes rains lightly in spring.
Trees and flowers grow with spring rain.
It often rains heavily in summer.
There is a long rainy season in summer.
So we should bring an umbrella in the rainy season.
lt occasionally rains with a typhoon in fall.
The typhoon involves pouring rain and strong wind.
When the typhoon passes, it causes a bad harvest.
lt seldom rains in winter.
lt snows rather than rain in winter because of a low temperature.

 

 

(Comprehension Test) 지금까지 배운 어휘, 구문을 활용하여 자유롭게 글을 써보세요.

 

Why must we speak English?
Korean students study English very hard to get good grades and go to university.
They read difficult paragraphs in papers, journals, and articles in English.
But most of them are afraid of talking in English.
If a foreigner asks them about something, they usually tend to avoid the foreigner.
Why do they feel afraid? Why don't they want to talk in English?
it is because it is unfamiliar to them.
We usually learn English reading and listening English text in school.
At first, I was nervous to talk to a foreigner.
My voice was getting smaller and trembling.
Teachers helped me to pronounce English words correctly.
If I was wrong, they taught me kindly about what I was wrong.
Moreover, teachers told me that if I had questions about anything, I should feel free to ask them whenever I wanted.
I feel like a 10 minutes is very short time for now.
Thanks to my U-phone English teacher, my English skills are getting better.
I appreciate my teachers help, and I am proud of myself.
Although I am still not good at English now, I have confidence and I will do my best.
My goal is to take U-phone English steadily.

 

 

 

 

Unit 12. Your friend is visiting from a hot country this winter. He has never seen real snow. What kind of winter activities will you do with him when he arrives? Why? 

I will go skiing with my friend who comes from a hot country.
Skiing is one of the activities on the snow.
To be honest, I don't like to go skiing because I am afraid of high places.
But I would like to introduce skiing to my friend.
The reason is that I want to give my friend winter memories.
It will be a special experience to my friend.
That is why I want to go skiing with my friend.
I have learned skiing once about eight years ago.
Even if I have learned skiing, I want to learn with my friend again because I can't remember that and if we learn skiing together, our freindship will be deeper.
Then, we will play the game of who is better.
I wish I could give her warm-hearted memories.
Probably, she will be satisfied about the winter activity that I recommended.

 

Unit 13. When was the last time you had an urgent situation? What was urgent? 

How did you handle the situation? 

The last time I had an urgent situation was two months ago.
I was on my way to take a TOEIC test that day.
At that time, I realized that I left my test identification slip at home.
I was very embarrassed, and I was worried that if I couldn't take a test.
I immediately searched "if I don't have a TOEIC test idenfication slip."
The TOEIC test no longer requires test identification slips.
Now the TOEIC test provides the test identification slips through Kakao Talk.
I was very relieved after I saw that.
I forgot it because the last time I took a TOEIC test was in a long time ago.
Although it was just happening, I have been checking it out carefully.

 

Unit 14. If you could interview anyone in the world, who would you interview? 

What would you talk about? Why? 

If I could interview anyone in the world, I will interview Seongjin-Jo.
He is a pianist who is a winner of the Chopin Piano Competition.
Seongjin-Jo is the first Korean to win the Chopin Piano Competition.
I am willing to go where he lives to interview him.
I would like to talk about playing the piano because I am interested in classical music.
There are a few questions to ask him.
I made the list of questions.

The list of questions:
-What will he do for the next piano competition?
-How does he spend his free time?
-When did he regret?
-Where does he get inspiration?
-What kind of music does he like except for classical music?
-If he has a daughter or son, will he recommend them to be a pianist?
(If he has a daughter or son who wants to be a pianist, will he support her/him? )
-What is the most important value in his life?
-What are his final goals?

 

Unit 15. Your foreign friend would like to take a bus from your house to the nearest shopping mall next weekend.  Please give her information about the best bus, how long it will take to get there, and how much it will cost. 

I will tell my foreign friend how to go to the nearest shopping mall.
The shopping mall is far from my house.
Let's imagine I am talking to my friend.

First of all, go to Wonji bus station.
Get a ticket from the ticket vending machine, and pay 2,400 won (about 2dollars).
Then, get on the bus from Wonji to Jinju.
It takes about 20 minutes.
When the bus gets to Bonggok Station, get off the bus.

You can choose from two ways.
First, get on bus number 140-144 or 350-362 at Bonggok Station.
You have to pay 1,500 won (about 1.27 dollars).
You have to get off the bus at Galleria Department Store Station.
You can easily find Galleria Department Store.

Second, you can walk from Bonggok Station to Galleria Department Store.
Maybe you will find it very easy to find the way because you just need to go straight the entire trip.
Probably it takes about 10 minutes.

I usually choose to walk because I have to wait for the bus for a long time at Bonggok Station.
Also, whatever I choose, the time is similar.
You can buy whatever you want to have in Korea in the shopping mall.
I hope you have a good time there.

 

 

 

Unit 16. Write about your strength or special ability which is much better than anyone else in detail. (It can be anything like eating Spaghetti in just three minutes.) 

In my opinion, I have three strengths.

My first strength is that I manage time well compared to others.
I always make a daily, weekly, monthly, and a yearly plan.
I pay attention to it in order to spend a great day.
So, I carry out most of my yearly plans.
And I am proud of myself for that.

Second, I usually positively.
Positivity makes me happy and considerate.
If I having a hard time, I solve the problem as soon as possible with a positive mind.

Third, I quickly figure out what do some people want to do.
This strength causes less trouble between us.
I will work hard to futher develop my strengths.

 

Unit 17. You are going to the beach tomorrow. 

Would you rather take the 6 a.m. train or the 12 p.m. train? Why? 

If I have to choose between 6 a.m. train or 12 p.m. train in summer, I will take the 6 a.m. train.
It is not a big deal to wake up early because I am a morning person.
I prefer to do something in early morning rather than night.
If I take the 6 a.m. train, I can play as much as possible.
It will be a great beach activity.

But if I have to choose between 6 a.m. train or 12 p.m. train now, I will take the 12 p.m. train.
I can't play in the sea in winter because of low temperature.
I will go to the beach and just look at the sea.
So I don't need to go to the beach early.

 

Unit 18. When was the last time you had to do a project? 

What kind of project was it? Did you do it well? How do you know? 

The last time I had to do a project was three months ago.
The project was non-metering report of our business place.
My supervisor urged me to make a presentation for the non-metering report.
I displayed graphs, images and charts.
Also, I used our company symbolizing colors.
Finally, I made 30 pages of presentation in two days.

At first , I was very worried about my presentation.
Lately, I heard from my manager that my supervisor praised me.
He was satisfied about the presentation because I finished the project better than he expected.
I have more confidence with it, and I try my best.

 

 

Unit 19. What kind of activities do you like to do on warm spring days? Give lots of details. 

I like to go on a picnic and flower-viewing event on warm spring days.
There are some flower festivals in Korea.
Most Koreans go out to see cherry blossoms in spring.
I am going to see the cherry blossom festival, such as 'Gunhangje'.
I would also like to ride a bicycle.
In my opinion, spring is the best season to do outdoor activities.
I pack some snacks and juice and ride a bicycle to a nearby walkway.
And I love to go to the amusement park.
Although I can't ride amusement park rides well, the amusement park is literally full of amusement.
The weather is getting warmer, and the temperature is rising more than ever.
I am looking forward to doing verious spring outdoor activities.

 

 

Unit 20. When was the last time you had to cancel an appointment due to sickness? 

What was wrong? 

The last time I had to cancel an appointment due to sickness was on December 29, 2019.
I was supposed to meet my friend on December 29, 2019.
I had to meet another friend one day ago.
I had a great time in another friend's house.
But I got a headache the next morning.
So I couldn't help canceling the appointment.
I felt sorry because she was looking forward to hanging out with me.
When I got rid of my headache, I made an appointment with her again.
I met her on Feburary 1, 2020.
I gave her a present that I chose.
She was surprised and was delighted.

 

Unit 21. If you have ever gotten a refund on clothes or any other stuff, write what you needed and the reason to get a refund. Describe the situation in as much detail as you can.

I have gotten a refund on clothes.
To be honest, it was an exchange, not a refund.
I bought T-shirts three years ago.
Wide-sleeved clothes was very popular in Korea at that time.
I don't like to wear wide sleeves because it is inconvenient.
When I have a meal, I got food stains on my sleeves.
The T-shirts that I bought were wide-sleeved T-shirts.
I didn't notice when I bought wide sleeves clothes.
That's why I wanted to refund the clothes.
I went to the clothing store with clothes that I got.
Unfortunately, the staff said, " It is impossible to refund by the customer's mistake. But you can exchange it for another item."
I picked the shirt without wide sleeves and put the clothes on the checkout counter.
I got a shirt that was different from what I expected.

 

 

Unit 22. Explain one of the dishes you can cook. Write the cooking process in detail including the materials which are needed for cooking.

I can cook "kimchijeon."
It means kimchi-pancake.
In other words, pancake that I can make is made of kimchi.
It is simple to make kimchijeon.
I should prepare kimchi, flour, an egg, an onion, cheese, and soy sauce.
First of all, I cut kimchi and an onion.
I put kimchi, onion, and egg in a bowl.
Then, I add flour enough to cover them slightly.
I mix all ingredients.
I put more cooking oil than usual and add cooking ingredients.
Especially, I pay attention to fry Kimchijeon because it is not easy to griddle large and thin kimchijeon.
When I finish cooking, I transfer kimchijeon to a broad plate.
Last, I have kimchijeon with soy sauce.

 

 

 

Unit 23. f you notice a single hair on a dish you ordered, would you rather exchange it or get a refund? Why? 

If I notice a single hair on a dish I ordered, I would rather exchange it.
First of all, I will call a waiter, and I'll let him know about this situation.
Then I will ask for exchange rather than refund.
Although I feel bad, it may have been just be a mistake.
I have made similar mistakes.
If I get a refund, I won't go there again because of that bad experience.
If I have no time to wait for the exchange, I will leave a chance to eat for next time.
Also, the reason I visit the restaurant is that I love to eat its excellent cuisine.

 

 

 

 

Unit 24. Please teach your friend how to make fried rice. Give lots of details to help her. 

You should prepare rice, an egg, an onion, a potato, some garlic, some bacon, oyster sauce, and pepper.
First of all, you have to cut a potato and an onion.
Then you need to heat a frying-pan and put cooking oil.
Put and fry potatoes.
When potatoes boil, add the onions, some garlic, some bacon, and pepper.
Fry ingredients.
After five minutes, add rice and oyster sauce.
If you put oyster sauce too much, it will be salt.
Fry all ingredients except for an egg.
When you finish cooking, you transfer fried rice that you made to a plate.
Last, place sunny side-up on fried rice.